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Aloefire Shadowclan Warrior

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Name: Aloefire
Gender: Female
Rank: Warrior
Age: 35 moons
Clan: Shadowclan

Personality


:bulletgreen: Positive  :bulletyellow: Neutral :bulletred: Bad

:bulletgreen: Caring

Aloefire has a big heart and wants everyone to know it, if someone is hurting she will take time out of her day to try and make them feel better. She hates to see others sad and wants more than anything for things to be peaceful and quiet, loud and unnerving situations make her extremely uncomfortable. If someone is fighting in front of her she will try to intervene but then slink away in fear, it causes her stomach to tie in knots and make her feel physically sick. This could be due to her father's coldness towards her whole family, being around others like him can cause anxiety and the need to be taking care of someone else.

:bulletred: Sensitive

One negative thing can make Aloefire teary eyed and wanting to blubber like a baby, she wears her heart where others can hurt her easily. Dissing her family and loved ones can make her feel as though she was attacked with claws instead of words. This causes her to not spend a lot of time with those that she doesn't know, new cats can cause more pain to her and that increases her anxiety. Whenever anyone mentions Autumnwhisper and her leaving the clan she feels hurt for her sister.

:bulletyellow: Average

Aloefire isn't exceptional at anything, she is a good runner when she doesn't fall down, but everything she does is what is expected of her. She doesn't surprise anyone with the things she does but isn't bad at really anything. She dabbles in a bit of everything but hasn't mastered anything, which could be due to her fear of failure.

:bulletred: Clumsy

The beautiful she-cat is as clumsy as a kitten, her legs can sometimes just give out from beneath her without a moment's notice. Other cats make fun of her for this but she can't control it, which contribute to her fear of being mocked. She tries really hard to be as graceful as can be, she can be seen walking around Shadowclan with her tail straight out and her legs stiff like boards.

:bulletgreen: Family Oriented

Ever since Autumnwhisper left the warrior has been trying desperately to be close with her family, they could just up and disappear without a moment's notice. Her father not being kind like a father should be makes her apprehensive about approaching them. She loves her sister more than anything and was at first hurt about her leaving for Thunderclan but knew that she had to let her sister live her life. She is always along Thunderclan's border trying to see the medicine cat.

:bulletyellow: Naive

Aloefire is easily convinced of something and will follow along with whatever you say or tell her to do. Her need to please also is a reason for this trait. You could tell her something far fetched and with enough convincing she will believe you wholeheartedly. Autumnwhisper helps her to distinguish when someone is lying to her or not.

History



Kit

As a kit Aloekit was very clingy to her mother and sister, she loved their company and when they would part from her she would cry and whimper in fear that they wouldn't come back. As she began to be more stable with her little fluffy body she would stick right by Autumnkit's side, if they went on an adventure she made sure to be with her sister. The two were always confused for each other, they looked very similar and were always together. Her parents weren't exactly loving and tender so she sought that kind of attention somewhere else, her siblings were the main ones she tried to get it from. Though as she neared the age of apprenticeship she began to adventure more on her own, she made sure not to go out of camp but did venture by herself.

Apprentice

Aloepaw was a bit more successful than when she was a kit, her mentor was satisfied with how she was coming along but didn't see anything outstanding about the young cat. The apprentice wasn't affected by this at first since she was young and had time to become better at this kind of thing. Though as time passed she didn't get much better and one day she was out with her father and was savagely beat by him. He was angered by her weakness and wanted to beat some sense into her for being the best. She tried to run from him but ended up not being fast enough to get away, he pinned her and hit her with either just his paw or every once in a while he would slice her with his claws. He left a scar under her chin, which she hides by keeping her head low, most cats just think she isn't confident. Once Aloepaw got away from her father she came back to camp with her independence stripped from her, now she depended on the company of others. When other cats were around her father could beat her like he had the last time. She tried with all her might to be the best she could, though it was impossible for the she-cat. No matter how hard she worked the apprentice couldn't be as good as anyone wanted. So keeping her head low she went through her apprenticeship with a quiet willingness to do what was commanded of her.

Warrior

Finally the day came where Aloefire would be free and do what she wanted, not to mention the terrifying leader, Fogstar, was gone and things were less ominous than they had been. She could run through her territory without the fear of being questioned on her loyalty to Shadowclan, though things did change in an instant. Autumnwhisper came to her saying that she was moving to Thunderclan, she was utterly blown away at the news. Tears in her eyes she didn't try to fight it but merely nodded and said she would miss her. Not letting her go wouldn't be something a good sister would do and all she wanted in this world was to be good to her family. Once her beautiful sister moved there was a hole in her chest, what was she to do without Autumnwhisper? Everyday she would spend most her time with her and now she was gone...


Roleplay Example



  Emberstar watched as Yellowlilly tried to stop the fight, but nothing was affecting Threadstar's lust for blood. "Please Yellowlilly, you'll only get hurt!" Suddenly Threadstar turned and slashed frightfully at the Willowclan medicine cat "I will make you feel the same pain that you put me through!" "Get off!" Emberstar ripped Threadstar off her friend and slapped her in the face really hard multiple times. Once the Stoneclan leader was back she grabbed Yellowlilly and carried her off to the side, "It'll be ok. I'm here with you." Suddenly pain seared across the white leader's back, Threadstar was raking her claws down her back. Emberstar slashed at Threadstar, she was beginning to panic. Finally she realized that she needed to end this, "I'm not afraid to kill you." She threw herself at Threadstar but suddenly blood burst from the mottled she-cat's throat. The light began to fade from Emberstar's eyes as she hit the ground, her body thumping painfully. Threadstar had slit her throat with her claws, a dirty move. Starry figures gathered around her as her soul separated from her mangled body, her loved ones were gathered around her. Lunajump, Voicestar, Wintercall, Littlesun, Mudkit, Spiderstar, Moonglance, Ravenpaw and her sibling Barkkit. All of these cats were late loved ones, tears formed in her eyes as they touched noses to her and whispered words of love and strength.
   As Emberstar's body hit the ground Sweetsoul screamed and ran at Threadstar only to be pulled back by other warriors. The she-cat was pregnant and couldn't risk losing the kits, the clan needed them. An outrage burst from the clans, especially from Willowclan.
 
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looking for a couple of warrior to be nermsters.deviantart.com/art/B… past apprentice, would i be able to wright them into his history? his currently not a TBT member and won't be for a while, but i thought id intertwine him with real cats.